Walter Hartwell White (work in progress, Stage 2)

A bit more detailed now. Still not quite up to code, but getting closer. I have an idea for the background that I'm sort of nervous to try... I'm not sure if it's right for the piece. The idea is to write out Shelley's "Ozymandias" in pale, hazy letters on the black background, partially obscured by wisps of smoke. I've seen similar designs elsewhere, and sometimes it works, but other times it just looks pretentious and/or stupid.